Planet Gallifrey: Episode 1

Tuesday, December 25

Episode 1

Partners in Crime

Episode Location: Earth, London 2008
Aliens/Enemies:
Miss Foster, the Adipose
New Characters: Donna, Wilf, Sylvia, Penny
Gadgets Used: Sonic Screwdriver, Sonic Pen, Necklace, Adipose tracking devise
Episode Objective: For Donna to find the Doctor. For the Doctor to find out about the mysterious Adipose Industries, and then for both Donna and the Doctor to stop the Adipose birth from being fatal.

This episode can be seen on PlanetGallifrey TV

Bullet-Point Plot
  • Donna walks the streets
  • So does the Doctor!
  • Both go to Adipose Industries
  • Use fake names & I.D's
  • Miss Foster is in charge
  • She gives a presentation
  • Claiming you take a pill
  • And "the fat just walks away!"
  • Theres a reporter, Penny
  • Who asks lots of questions
  • Donna & the Doctor snoop
  • But they keep missing each other
  • They each talk to an employee
  • And are given a complimentary necklace
  • They ask for a list of customers
  • And follow up one of the people
  • Donna goes to Stacey's house
  • The Doctor goes to Roger's
  • Roger looses a kilo of fat a night
  • And is always woken up at 1.05 am
  • The Doctor asks about a cat flap
  • Since "The fat just walks away"
  • Stacey goes to the toilet
  • Donna waits downstairs
  • She fiddles with the necklace
  • And Stacy clutches her stomach
  • An Adipose is formed
  • And an alarm alerts Miss Foster
  • She sends out her security men
  • While Donna asks if Stacey is alright
  • Stacey isn't
  • And she explodes into 20 or so Adipose
  • Donna catches sight of one of them
  • And rushes out side
  • The Doctor says goodbye to Roger
  • And his tracking devise goes off
  • He runs along the streets
  • Trying to follow the signal
  • The Adipose are put in a van
  • Which drives right past him
  • And he looses the signal
  • Hes only a street away from Donna
  • Donna goes home
  • Her mother yaps on at her
  • About getting a job etc etc
  • Donna goes to see Granddad
  • They have a nice talk
  • About Donna searching
  • For a man in a blue box
  • The Doctor in the TARDIS
  • Examines his necklace
  • And begins speaking
  • But he realizes he's alone
  • Next day:
  • Doctor & Donna return to Adipose Industries
  • They both hide
  • Until the office has closed
  • Donna is in the bathroom
  • Her mum rings her
  • And yaps on about the car
  • Miss Foster enters
  • Searching for the intruder
  • Her security start searching
  • And find Penny
  • They take her away
  • To Miss Fosters' office
  • And tie her up
  • Donna & Doctor eavesdrop
  • Miss Foster talks about the pill
  • And how it gathers fat
  • And makes a body
  • An Adipose!
  • Doctor and Donna see each other
  • Donna is ecstatic
  • Doctor is confused
  • They mouth a conversation
  • Through the windows
  • Miss Foster sees them
  • And they run
  • They finally meet on the stairs
  • And head onto the roof
  • They get into a window cleaning platform
  • And descend down the building
  • Miss Foster chases them up
  • With her own sonic devise
  • The Window platform breaks
  • Donna & Doctor start to fall
  • Doctor stops the platform
  • Miss Foster deadlocks the building
  • And then sonics the cable
  • The platform lurches
  • And Donna falls out
  • She's left hanging from a cable
  • Miss Foster is about to cut the other cable
  • But the Doctor sonics her devise
  • She drops it as it sparks
  • And the Doctor catches it
  • He can now get into the building
  • So he rushes downstairs
  • And helps Donna inside as well
  • They free Penny
  • And run off
  • Straight into Miss Foster
  • She tells them her real name
  • And that shes a nanny to the Adipose
  • Shes about to kill them
  • But Donna & Doctor escape
  • Miss Foster is worried
  • What she's doing is illegal
  • So she sends out a signal
  • To go into "premature labor"
  • Adipose start appearing everywhere!
  • Doc & Donna find the signal transmitter
  • And try to stop the transition
  • Using the complimentory necklace
  • Donna & he have a nice talk
  • And the Doc confesses he's still alone
  • He mentions Martha
  • And how he destroyed half her life
  • He also says that Rose is still lost
  • Miss Foster doubles the signal
  • So people will die, like Stacey
  • The Doctor is distressed
  • He can't save them
  • As he needs another necklace
  • Donna holds hers up
  • They have a cheesy grin
  • And stop the signal
  • Miss Foster gathers all the Adipose
  • And the Mother Ship appears
  • The Adipose are beamed up
  • As is Miss Foster
  • Doc & Donna run up to the roof
  • And try to talk to Miss Foster
  • Doc explains about the Mother Ship
  • How they know its illegal
  • To breed Adipose on Earth
  • So they'll want to get rid of evidence
  • e.g Miss Foster
  • The ship stops beaming her up
  • And she falls to her death
  • The danger is all over
  • And Donna demands to go with the Doctor
  • She already has her stuff
  • And just needs to ring her mother
  • To tell her the car keys are in the bin
  • Donna stops a bystander
  • And tells her to tell her mother which bin it is
  • She then runs off
  • The bystander turns around
  • And its ROSE!
  • But then she fades away
  • Doc & Donna take off in the TARDIS
  • And make a brief stop over a hill
  • Wilf looks up
  • And sees the blue box
  • He looks through his telescope
  • And sees Donna inside
  • The TARDIS disappears
  • As Wilf dances with joy!
Best Bits
- Meercats in the office
- Adipose birth
- Stargazing
- Conversation in Mime
- March of the Adipose
- "I just want a mate!"
- A glimpse of Rose

Favorite Quotes
Roger Davey: I'm not a cat person.
The Doctor
: No, I've met cat people; you're nothing like them.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sylvia
: What are you doing in church?
Donna
: Praying!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Doctor: [mouthing from behind soundproof glass] Donna?!
Donna
: [also mouthing] Doctor!!!!
Doctor
: But... what? Wh- What?
Donna
: Oh! My! God!!!
Doctor
: But.. How?
Donna
: [pointing at self] It's me!
Doctor
: Well, I can see that!
Donna
: Oh, this is brilliant!
Doctor
: But... what the hell are you doing there???
(Donna's just so thrilled, she waves! Big smile!)

Doctor
: But, but, but, why, what, where, when?
Donna
: You! I was looking for you!
The Doctor
: What for?!
Donna
: [miming] I came here, trouble, read about it, Internet, I thought trouble equals you! This place is weird! Pills! So I hid, back there. Crept along. Heard this lot. Looked. You! Cos they... [pauses to see Miss Foster staring at them]
Miss Foster
: [out loud] Are we interrupting you?
The Doctor
: [mouthing] Run!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Penny
: Will someone please tell me what the hell is going on?!?!
The Doctor
: What are you, journalist?
Penny
: Yes.
The Doctor
: Well, make it up!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Doctor: Do you know what happens when you point two identical sonic devices at each other?
Miss Foster
: [after a brief pause] No idea.
The Doctor
: Me neither... let's find out!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Donna: Well, that's one solution - hide in a cupboard! I like it...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Donna: [incredulously, as they wave to the Adipose] We're waving at fat.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Doctor: She fancied me.
Donna:
Mad Martha that one, blind Martha, Charity Martha.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Doctor: I just want a mate!
Donna
: You just want to mate?!
Doctor
: I just want a mate!
Donna
: You're not mating with me, sunshine!

69 comments:

Anonymous said...

Woman with screwdriver, eh?
I'm thinking the Rani?

Anonymous said...

Isn't Rani a female timelord who escaped just before Gallifrey being destroyed?
In the last of season 3, a red-nailed hand picked up the master's ring from the ash....and Miss Foster is also red-nailed.

Anonymous said...

this is confusing me. i thought it was miss foster who was the living fat that absorbs. people the rani does not apear in this episode. don't know about the other sonic but she is not the rani.

Anonymous said...

actualy from the pic of the doc holding the two it does not look like a sonic screwdriver at all. its probably some other device.

Anonymous said...

it's a pen people dont get to crazy it is a pen you can seev the end

Anonymous said...

that womenis either the Rani or something els but what the heck is the living tissue??

Matt Largo said...

Gods, can we PLEASE not let it be the Rani? She's a poor man's Master. For my money, The Rani is behind Sil, the Quarks, and the vintage '80's Cybermen in terms of overall, preposterous lameness.

Anonymous said...

this is looking similar to the abzorbaloff....living fatty tissue that ABSORBS????? am i just seeing things here????

also, who on earth is the Rani? i've heard her name, and i know she's an evil timelord/timelady who....does what exactly?

Anonymous said...

Maybe the ring that this red nailed lady picked up is a bit like the chamellion arc. maybe the master is sorta living inside this ring i mean he has been reported to appear later in the series.

It does sound unlikley but i predicted that the master would appear in series 3 and Davros would in series 4. i could be right!

Anonymous said...

Ah, I think I've may have cracked the RED code in this episode. You see, when under wraps, the episode was meant to be about Donna trying to find the Doctor because of an alien RED alert. The episode was even rumoured to be called "Red Alert" on doctorwhoonline.com

Anonymous said...

People, the red-nailed hand was obviously the master's "wife", and if you think it has anything to do with this episode, read some interviews. They say, and I quote "...The hand taking the ring was a plot device for future writers, and we don't plan to do anything with it."

Also, The rani wouldn't come back immediately after reviving a different time lord, it would look like they were short of ideas. If the rani's coming back, it's not til season 5 or 6.

Anonymous said...

Cool, the Doctor's fighting the children of the Stay Puff Marshmallow Man!

UNIT said...

Alien weight loss pill? Sounds like the torchwood novel slow decay to me.

Please be the Rani!!!

Anonymous said...

it could be the rani, these tablet things could be one of her experiments, in the classic series when the doctor met her twice she was carrying out sum wierd experiments, maybe this is her trying summit new, maybe the tablet takes control of people or summit, im just guessing here but it does sound like it would be a good story, an army of controlled humans for the rani to use for anything she likes, like revenge on the doctor

Anonymous said...

the adipose dont look scary at all

musicfreak2k10 said...

ok - its a really bad idea for the story arc, but could it be colours?
cos we had RED as a rumoured story arc, we have project INDIGO in episode 12, and we have GRAY who is captain jack's brother in torchwood.
god its good to speculate.

Anonymous said...

aw the adipose look so cute. but they maybe like the green dudes from the film Gremlins-small and funny, but they can tear your bloody face off! maybe it could be like the movie Alien, because the adispose could burst out of the person's belly (like from the picture of the adipose stretching someone's stomach at the top of the page).

Anonymous said...

about the colour arc theory, it's a good idea but i think colours are too vague, and what would they lead up to? of course i could quite easily be wrong.

Combom said...

I've suspected sarah was to be the rani since the "cremation" of the master scene, plus hearing about her. If Sarah is the Rani, I believe we will not find out yet, perhaps it will be another of those "Bad Wolf" style appearances in every episode, then find out in ep 12/13?

Anonymous said...

She must be the Rani.

DOCTOR FOSTER went to Gloucester in a shower of RAIN!

Doctor? Foster? Rain-I mean-Rani?

Come on Russell, give us a hard one, mate...

Anonymous said...

to quote the doctor WHAT?

Anonymous said...

Ol' Russel and his wordgames. People have been asking about anagrams of Foster, Miss Foster etc. to get to the real character name.

There's s way of getting from Foster to Rain, which is an anagram of Rani, via a nursery rhyme that also involves a Doctor.

I think the Doctor is more likely to say "see where you're going way off the mark good try though", in about 2 seconds ;-)

n.t. said...

http://www.votesaxon.org.uk/ Partway through the third video, she says "Happy birthday... one millionth birthday." Strike anyone as odd?

Jess said...

I think she means One million birthdays... meaning one million little Adipose are about to be born

Anonymous said...

where did you get that picture of the adipose in the sink? it does not look like it is from the clip of donna's friend.

Anonymous said...

Eh?

Rose, and then she disappeared...

Anonymous said...

Well that was wierd, i dont think anybody expected rose that soon. What was all that about...

Perhaps the finale will take place at the same time that this episode did...

Anonymous said...

I guess Rose is the story arc!

Anonymous said...

Brilliant Episode!

I think I can guess whats going on with Rose.

She may have found the Torchwood or UNIT from the other dimesion.

And is bleeding through breaks in time using some sort of device that is not fully developed so she cant stay for long.

But later she can.

Any other thoughts?

Anonymous said...

that sounds good, and if the rumours about davros trying to break through the void r right then that explains stuff, maybe rose is in her torchwood and they noticed sumthing strange and she wanted to go and look so thats how she came through, and by the end of the seires davros is through and so is rose, oh and the way a tv guide i read says it davros is bac cause the way it is written suggests he is bac and its not just saying is he or isnt he

Anonymous said...

I think the void is breaking between the parallel universes. Davros may have been hidden in the Time Lord prison...

What does everyone else think?

Anonymous said...

A good episode but nowhere near as good as Smith & Jones however Rose appearing made it all worth while.

Has anyone considered that there is a Doctor in Rose's universe?

Anonymous said...

That would make the most sense, as the Time Lords would want to capture the creator of the Daleks and have him work to destroy the Daleks. And then when Davros refuses they could have locked him up with a bunch of Daleks. Since the Genesis Ark and all those other Daleks are back in the void, its very likely that Davros is using the Daleks to try and break out of the void, unintentionally causing Pete's World to collapse and spit Rose, Mickey, Jackie, and Pete out in our world. That would be a good story arc, with Rose trying to find out what's going on and getting through small holes that Davros makes in both universes.

Anonymous said...

Davros could have been hiding in the Genesis Arc and ended up on parallel Earth! Maybe when the Daleks got sucked through, they actually got to the other side and came back when Rose found a way!

Anonymous said...

But wouldn't Davros had had the Daleks kill everyone on the parallel Earth and conquer that universe? It is definitely what the Daleks would do at any rate, so why would they bother coming back here, or why would they let Rose live?

Anonymous said...

dara, that's what i said.
god, read the other posts.

Anonymous said...

if there is a doctor in rose's universe, why would she want to come back?

Anonymous said...

it's 'cus there isn't
Time lords can go through alternate universes, so ther is only 1 time lord, no alternate ones

Anonymous said...

Jackcos13, I thought you were talking about a different Time Lord prison! Geez, don't get your knickers in a twist!

Anonymous said...

Sorry Dara.
Don't know why I was having a row, Rose was just in the first episode.
I should be really excited.

Anonymous said...

hello i thought roses appearance was great but does anyone know or have any ideas what her storyline involves or weather shel stay for another series

Anonymous said...

Did anyone else notice the sticker on the taxi it said ATMOS little cool thing to notice

Anonymous said...

see the sontarans are nothing to worry about, theyre just running a taxi company

Anonymous said...

Hmmm....Rose is wearing the same thing that she wears in later episodes.....

Anonymous said...

I've thought of a story arc. Could it be ROSE? Because Rose was mentioned quite a bit in Series 3. And in Partners In Crime, Rose was seen and mentioned by Donna. And I think on on of the finale pages, there was an arc about picking out letters of seen and mentioned words which spell ROSE.

Anonymous said...

if theres no parallel doctor how come theres a parallel torchwood coz if you think about it torchwood was set up because of the doctors actions by queen vic but because there isn't a parallel doctor queen vic died so how did parallel torchwood happen???

Anonymous said...

well if the time lords can travel between parallel universes meaning there is only 1 for all, then those torchwood's may have been setup when the doctor (or a diffeent timelord) went to that universe.

if that isn't right, then RTD's answer of 1 timelord really didn't work out.

Anonymous said...

ummm.... Sorry dont mean to be missing the point or anything....

Its great that Rose is back and all, but if she dissapeared then does that mean that Slyvia never got her car keys back??

hahah coz that would be awkward (searching every bin)

Anonymous said...

wait, daleks invading, sontarans, STOP !!!SYLVIA CANT FIND HER KEYS!!! aaaaaah

Anonymous said...

there is a parralal torchwood cause the attack on queen victoria still took place in that universe but she died so the torchwood there was created because of her death, thats how there torchwood came about, to stop that sort of thing happening again

Anonymous said...

Hahaha but it is ture isnt it, Syvia not finding her keys coz technically Rose never passed the message.

O wells i bet Donna would get a nagging about it when she gets back.

at least Rose is back ya!

Anonymous said...

dont see how this helps but ATMOS is the name of a shoe company, a clock company and an energy company.

Anonymous said...

I don't know about shoes but there is lots of energy in Dr Who, and the clocks represent TIME.

Anonymous said...

Erm, is it just me or does the sound of Rose's footsteps sound more like "normal" floor than congrete - which she is supposed to walk on? Is it just me or is anyone else thinking Torchwood?

Anonymous said...

Amazing first episode, loved it :D
1 thing thats just came to my mind, could be to do with rose returning. what about in time crash when the 2 tardis's collided. *blow a whole in the space time continuim the size of...belguim* couldnt that mean that there was a gap in the universe when the 2 tardis's collided allowing rose/davros 2 get in???? it just popped into my head

Anonymous said...

In The Runaway Bride I thought that Donna's theme was silly. But it kinda works now. And yunno the music in this episode when The Doctor and Donna are getting in the window cleanie thingy, and the same music in where the Doctor is trying to get Donna out of the window. The music is sort of supensive with DJ scratches in the background. It was used a lot in this episode. I think that this is the main song/theme for series 4, like "All the Strange,Strange Creatures" in series 3.

Anonymous said...

i just watched the episode with the commentary and realised that Rose nods when donna is speaking therefore she knows she is being spoken too and aknowledges it whether or not shes thinks shes still in the parallel universe is unknown but im sure there must be some recognition when they meet again in the last episodes of the series.

Anonymous said...

Rose may be the arc thingy becasue RTD did say that the Master mentioned it and he did make mention of Rose while taunting Martha in Last of the Time Lords.
Just throwing that out there.

Anonymous said...

Okay, now RTD's really confusing the crap out of me. He said that the arc is more of an arc theme, and not a consistent word. He said that it's cumulative and something from each episode contributes to the finale. Perhaps this could still be "Red" but that's too constant.

I'm beginning to entertain a zodiac theory, which starts with Max CAPRICORN is VotD. How does this apply to PiC? Well, here are possible theories...

1. That glass statue horn thing on Miss Foster's desk. Could that be a symbol for Taurus?

2. That guy the Doctor visits with the catflap. For a second there's a strange shot where you see his goldfish. Pisces?

3. In the alley when the Doctor stands there with Donna's bags... there's graffiti on the wall where you can make out an arrow. Could this be the Sagittarius symbol?

I bet one of these and not all of these applies...that's if this theory is valid. Which it's probably not. Just throwing it out there. Still, a Zodiac theme would go well with Donna's grandfather, who's an amateur astronomer.

Anonymous said...

Jess, for 'Gadgets Used', you have forgot to put the Doctor's Adipose Tracking Devise.

Jess said...

Yup! Indeed I did! Thanks for letting me know, I'm still trying to find the time to update this page. So much to do so little time!

Anonymous said...

Anyonymous person, (a.k.a person that posted comment 2,) the person who picked up the Master ring from the ash was the Master's wife, not Miss Foster!

Anonymous said...

When is series four going to show in Australia?? I want to know!

Anonymous said...

my little poem. I have also written one for some of the other episodes and will continue making them up till the series ends

Partners in crime
that's what they said
don't go with that 'doctor'
you could end up dead!

but still i went
i almost begged him to let me
well after last christmas
how could he forget me?

we investigated blobs
of walking fat
i gavbe my keys to some blonde girl
and we flew off just like that!

Anonymous said...

Didn't anyone realise the daleks got sucked in the middle of the void so they were in the middle of each universe stuck because the doctor and rose closed the void/bridge so no one could get back in except the daleks didn't realise that there was still a gap in the middle so yhey could have got out either side but they didn't so thats what really basically happened

Anonymous said...

the adipose were so cute

Anonymous said...

Adipose is nice living fat creatures who appears in fat people s body and fat people has become the sitheen

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